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Title : Madman
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PostSubject: 'Without'   Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:24 pm

OOC: Something simple I whipped up before bed. Comments are welcome.


Is a Rose without its thorns?
Is a Bull without its Horns?
Can a Bird without its Wings?
Is a Song if no-one Sings?

Can Time be without a Clock?
What is Earth without Rock?
Is the Sun without the Sky?
Is a Tale if there’s no Lie?

Is there Faith without a God?
Is it Yes without a Nod?
There is one thing that is True.
I am nothing without You.


"You don't have to be mad here, but it helps."
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PostSubject: Re: 'Without'   Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:54 pm

The last two lines of this poem draws it together beautifully! A wonderful piece of work, Madd.

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